Silence

March 11, 2007

You’ve spent the day into the night alone
When the moon suddenly rings
Like china dropped on a tablecloth,
Startling you.

8 Responses to “Silence”

  1. Dana Hunter Says:

    Fantastic imagery! I could hear the moon ringing – and before now, I’d never thought it made a sound.

    Brilliant!

  2. Paul Says:

    Dana, thank you so much! If you should ever call my poetry “brilliant” even once again, I shall certainly propose marriage to you!

  3. Paul Says:

    Zounds! My heart’s going to get broken again! Oh, well, it’s in a good cause!

  4. apophaticattic Says:

    Ooh, very zen. I like it.

  5. Paul Says:

    Thank you, AA! :)

  6. SilentChorus Says:

    Wow, This is truly beautiful Paul!

    ~Dani~

  7. Paul Says:

    Thank you so much, Dani! Welcome to the blog!

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