Silence
March 11, 2007
You’ve spent the day into the night alone
When the moon suddenly rings
Like china dropped on a tablecloth,
Startling you.
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You’ve spent the day into the night alone
When the moon suddenly rings
Like china dropped on a tablecloth,
Startling you.
August 12, 2008 at 5:26 AM
Fantastic imagery! I could hear the moon ringing – and before now, I’d never thought it made a sound.
Brilliant!
August 12, 2008 at 5:33 AM
Dana, thank you so much! If you should ever call my poetry “brilliant” even once again, I shall certainly propose marriage to you!
August 12, 2008 at 5:45 AM
Brilliant!
;-D
August 12, 2008 at 5:56 AM
Zounds! My heart’s going to get broken again! Oh, well, it’s in a good cause!
August 14, 2008 at 1:43 AM
Ooh, very zen. I like it.
August 14, 2008 at 2:59 AM
Thank you, AA!
August 14, 2008 at 11:45 PM
Wow, This is truly beautiful Paul!
~Dani~
August 14, 2008 at 11:49 PM
Thank you so much, Dani! Welcome to the blog!